Who It’s For

You might already have a book outline, a manuscript in progress (up to 10,000 words), a LinkedIn profile, a TED talk, or a speech draft - and a nagging sense that something about the story isn’t landing the way it should.

This is a human read, not an automated one. I read your material myself and give you a written diagnosis, not a generated report.

The Expert Review is a fast, affordable way to find out exactly what’s missing before you invest in a much larger project.

What I’ll Analyse

  • Narrative strengths already working in your favour

  • Structural weaknesses

  • Missing or unclear emotional arc

  • Hidden themes you haven't noticed yet

  • Positioning opportunities

What You’ll Receive

A written report (usually 10-15 pages) plus an optional 45-minute call to talk through the findings.

Turnaround

Within 5 working days of submission.

The Expert Review

A written diagnosis of the non-fiction story you're already trying to tell. A human audit, not an AI one.l

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  • An Expert Review is a written diagnosis of an existing book outline, manuscript excerpt, or professional profile, delivered personally by me, not generated by AI. It costs £1000 and covers narrative structure, emotional arc, and positioning.

  • No. I read and write it directly, based on years of ghostwriting experience with founders and entrepreneurs.

File Upload and Payment: Next Steps

Firstly, please upload your audit-ready file using the form below, including your contact details.

Now click the ‘Book a Story Audit’ button below. Fill out the pop-up form, click Submit, and you’ll be taken to checkout. Once payment has been received, I’ll have the Story Audit to you within 5 working days.

Expert Review
£1,000.00

A written diagnosis of the story you're already trying to tell. A written report (10–15 pages), plus an optional 45-minute call to talk through the findings of my analysis within 5 working days of submission, depending on project size.

I'll analyse

  • Narrative strengths already working in your favour

  • Structural weaknesses

  • Missing or unclear emotional arc

  • Hidden themes you haven't noticed yet

  • Positioning opportunities

FAQs

What can I submit?

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•    A book outline, manuscript excerpt (up to 10,000 words), LinkedIn profile, personal website, TED talk or speech transcript.

Is this confidential?

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•    Yes — everything submitted is treated with the same confidentiality as a full ghostwriting project.

What happens after?

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•    If you'd like to build the findings into a complete book, the natural next step is the Legacy Vision Session.